- If I say goodbye to you today will you forgive me. I'm not trying to be mean it's time for me to go and show who I really am, and leaving you might be the only way to get to the journey ahead. So as I say goodbye to the love of my life it hits me then I realize my dreams are right here you've been the one this whole time and now I realize without you I can't live a happy life so please stay by my side because I don't want to loose the love of my life.
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Love Of My Life.
- Artist: 9Importance4
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- Date: 07/17/2008
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- demyri - 12/14/2008
- Um, the subject was good, but the paragraph makes it hard to read and see where you might have wanted breaks or pauses for effect, so it kind of sounds like several run-on sentences..
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- Call_meh_Kyrii-chan - 07/17/2008
- shouldnt you ad a *gasp* at the end? because that last sentance was LONG! i give a 2.
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