What I feel When im with you

• Artist: icreator
• Description: um it just came to me so in wrote it down..
  Fixed the erros :'D
  I don't feel this way about any one ... so far
  so um vote fair and thank you ^-^
• Date: 07/19/2008
• Tags: whatifeel

When im with you
I can't control the feeling
It's so strange and im so young
You make my heart beat with passion and love
Why must I feel this way when I
Look at you
Touch you
Kiss you
Hug you
Breathe by you
Or when you
Look at me
Touch me
Kiss me
Hug me
But especially When you Love me
heart .

Comments

[Moo Forever]

Aww, that's adorable! x3 5/5. And I'm becoming a fan, I liked your other poem too! XD

[iifwesh_bunnii]

theres alot of errors...
but its pretty sweet
i think im gonna forward this to my bf and say
"this is how i feel when im wit u <3"
and i'll say it was nicely written by this
except for a few errors...
it gets a 4/5 ^^;

[moving_accounts55]

thats so touching

[XxX_rAwR dOgGeH_XxX]

good!5/5

[Marael]

If you're going to spell things wrong intentionally, do it often enough to make it look intentional. It looks like either really bad typos or like text talk.

[icreator]

Omg i was weely scared putting this in i hope its good ^-^