Loveth

• Artist: katsudon
• Description: Some poem I wrote in Year 9. ^^ Please comment. Also, my other poems can be found by typing 'Bonnie Tinyiu Lee' in Google. They're mine =D
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: love

Love is messy
Complicated
Hurtful

You can feel betrayed
Infuriated
Lonely

It can come
And yet it can be taken away
So quickly

Enjoy it while you can.

Comments

[small kid_21054]

It's good and true

[Liquid Robot]

To be honest, I don't think this works. If no one had written a poem about love before, it would be good, but as it stands, it is a major cliché; I can't really find any original thoughts in this.

[marvinxder]

pretty good