This is just to say

• Artist: Zeimarlu
• Description: *shrugs*
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: forgive senseless selfish

This is just to say,

I have been senseless,
and selfish,
I was blind and unable to see,
you deserved another chance...
to live;

and which you tried,
but could not sustain
that weak life
that hung by a thread.

Forgive me for not being able
to hold on for you;
you were so small,
so bright,
You longed to be free...
But now it is too late,
so forgive me for not being able to see.

Comments

[BitterYetSweet]

:] its good.

[The Goddess Eclaire]

Sad...that is sad. It sounds like a story about a miscarriage. sorry if that is insulting or anything

[Rozoko]

Despite the absence of a rhyme scheme, you pulled off a rather nice story. It flowed really well. Very impressive. 5

[Rainbow And A Smile]

Both of yours are really pretty. I like them a lot.

[rosemidnight17]

i def like this. lol you shrug like its nothing but its really good. whatever or whoever you were speaking of in this poem sounds so delicate. like a glass bird. wishes to be free and yet so breakable.

[X_iiSmExiiAshleyy_X]

um... tHatz beAuTiFuL!!