Her eyes are screaming

• Artist: Toxik_Tonik
• Description: My inspiration
  
  It looks like her eyes are screaming,
  she wants your help,
  but is afraid to ask.
  She'll trust you with everything,
  or so she says,
  but to tell you the truth,
  she really dreads,
  to tell you the thoughts in her head.
  She tell you shes fine,
  but shes really in pain.
  You know that she lies,
  and it drives you insane,
  but you leave it alone.
  She doesnt know why,
  she can tell you.
  But she loves you with all her heart,
  and you know its true.
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: hereyesarescreamingtriciatoxik

It looks like her eyes are screaming
I want to help
So just ask
You know you can trust me
So why you don't I know not
I can see the fear in your screaming eyes
In your head I can not find
The meaning of a single word "Fine"
I can see the fire burning in your heart
With love and passion and a heated spark
You can lie
I still pretend
That I believe the words that were said
I love you babe
I swear its true. . .

Comments

[XXeverXX]

it pretty good....................

[holydeath reaper]

The last three-quarters is good, it flows well, however, the first few lines do not bring about the rhythm of the rest, setting it slightly off-balance, but overall, well done.