leave it all behind

• Artist: UNKNOW dude ii
• Description: yeah i like 2 let my work speak 4 itself =)
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: overlordofamsterdam black rose

As i toss the black rose into the flame
i realize ive only got myself to blame
thoughts of darkness shroud through my mind
a past of sin i must leave behind
walking away from my twisted life
i'll end it all with this blood stained knife
my last confession
is my hearts depression
i cood never b true
my final words.....i love you

Comments

[Pursuiting Happiness]

I don't think this deserves five stars. First of all, to make it pleasing to the eye, you should really use proper grammar and punctuation. With that said, your story could have been more unique. I see this too much.

[Glamourre]

Ehehehe....despite the raving of other critics, I personally wouldn't say that this marks you as a 'poetic soul'. It's a common theme, a common use of roses as a comparison to the beauty of death, a common ending. It's not horrible overall, it just isn't....original.

[generic smoothies]

very impressive. smile

[2muchanime4u]

very beautiful also, you have a very poetic soul, ur mind must b very artistic to think of such work
five stars

[The Fallen Light]

woohoo that was awesome!!!!! very nice