All of You

• Artist: Trinity cream
• Description: To and for someone important to oneself. This poem contains five syllables per line. Each weather represents an expression of someone's emotions and facial features.
• Date: 07/22/2008
• Tags: allofyou someone weather feeling

All of You
I want to see you
In any weather
Even if it's bad

Let the rain drops fall
From the clouds above
Let the bright sun show
In the sky so high
Let the breeze caress
And I embrace it
Let the wind be mean
It will not last long
Let the storm roar on
Snow will one day melt

Any time of day
In any weather
I will feel the same

Comments

[imsoboredmate]

Dis some good stuff ryt here ;D

[Trinity cream]

Thanks

[canigohome]

i loved it!
=]
great job

[Kingkong541]

For the second stanza, most of it sounds really good like a nice rhythm and beat if you read it aloud, but the last line i think sort of messes it up. Nice job biggrin

[Trinity cream]

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