Will you grant my wish tonight

• Artist: La Cerise Noire
• Description: Inspired by a story I recently read. In the story, if you saw a Phoenix, you could have one wish granted, and it got me thinking.......
• Date: 07/23/2008
• Tags: phoenix wish

Phoenix, Phoenix, in my sight,
Will you grant my wish tonight?

The night where moon is distant and cold,
The night, where Owl and her kin grow bold,
This night in your fire, gold.
Will you grant it, when my wish is told?

I wish for happiness and merriment and joy,
And some fond memories for all to enjoy.

For all hatred and anger to be cast away,
If only, for just today.

But perhaps my wish is too great a task,
Can you melt my icy mask?

For I too, wish to break from my shell,
And smile, every once in a while.
For years all I've seen is Hell,
For in it's fiery pits I dwell

And now, all I ask for is joy;
Can you give me that at least?

Phoenix, Phoenix, in my sight,
Will you grant my wish tonight?

Comments

[ThA AzN DeViL]

5/5 I cannot fathom how good it is, basically describes my life, probably why i love it so much... and i love the ending looping back to the beginning too, much love for the poem!

[rock star emma]

is there a real Phoenix in this world

[Wishful Senility]

I really like this one and I think it's really sweet. ;_;
*envies your writing ability*

[The Koishii Warrior]

I like it^^ 5 star^^

[Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels]

This is pretty sweet.