Letting it out in a letter.

• Artist: Time is on our side
• Description: I Wrote that When I was.. Sick And not in the perverted way. I Was Almost Dead At The Time... Writing was my only factor of survival. ; - ;
• Date: 07/25/2008
• Tags: deathbrokenweakunstoppableactions

If i could kill that stupid mutha ******** b***h he broke my heart.
Took my own pitchfork and shredded meh apart.
If I Wasnt so weak I wouldnt stop to speak.
Out a thing or two of what he did to meh.
How i wish I could hurt you back, How i wish i could take it back.
Cut meh up and the blood dripped, You held it in but the pain just grew.
You told the crowd.. But they never new.
He watched meh with that evil smile that evil grin, that evil smile..
that evil smile..
How i wish i could hurt you back, How i wish i could take it back.
You cut me up and the blood dripped.
You held it in but the pain just grew..
You told the crowd but they never new..
They never new the truth..

Comments

[Luscara]

I would like this if you would go back and re-write it with "meh" written as "me". Meh... is alliteration, expressing a mood as a sound... not a reference to one's self.

[The Heart Break Kid 1]

ummm not to sound mean but poetry has no use for the ******** word and the b***h word but i understaind that u were pissed off but u could have used better words then thoos i sould know i have done many comps and walked away with 1st and 2nd place spots so deal with out thoos cuss words and ur poems would be way better and if it was for a song then uhh my bad lol