We are all the same

• Artist: Sacred Dragon X
• Description: This was a random poem i decided to write. My inspiration was Miss Jenny, a beautiful young lady who has just come into my life as a wonderful friend. Tasteful and helpful critisicm would be very helpful and much appreciated. Thank you.
• Date: 07/28/2008
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When we look in the mirror
the face that we see...
is it truly you?
is it truly me?

The face that stares at you
the eyes that shine
are those yours?
are those mine?

The mask that hides our soul
it's shadow confine
what is truly you
what is truly mine

We hide ourselves everyday
from the cruelty of society
i cannot see you
and you cannot see me

Only an open heart
you will soon find
it can save your soul
it can save mine

We arent different
the same we can be
i am like you
and you are like me

So the moral here
is be true
be true to yourself
be true to me...

Comments

[Sadette]

I wanted to thank you. For writing this poem. I am estatic, that we met the way we did. I'm glad that we can be an inspiration to each other. <3 - Miss Jenny

[Luna_C_Bug]

i LlOoVvEe it it's so emo in a loving true way like saying everyone is fine the way they are as long as they are them not trying to be someone lese

[StarHoper]

I loved your poem! All the words just seemed to flow and it had a wonderful beat to it. Many poems these days to me don't seem to make sense but yours had a really great moral and subject. 5 Stars and an A+

[sean1421]

pretty good xd