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Your poetry, dripping imagery, w
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off the page like my pipe’s smoke
just before I realized that living wasn’t
LIFE.
It wasn’t the tickle-my-thoughts
feeling rolling in my lungs
while retching up the want
to simply [********
and the pride that wouldn’t let me
do it sooner.
I wanted to float like rose petals
decorating your pen, perfuming the paper
with olden time’s hopes of candy-filled
eyes and bursting-open hearts.
But the bleeding weighed down my feather-self
as if someone was only chanting,
“Stiff as a board…”
Damnit I was!
I
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******solid.
And I realized
that that essence I spewed high
Was.Not.Life.
Life was my personality’s civil war,
contradicting itself mid-sentence--
before the words to form it
were ever thought. Life
was drinking down the lovehate
his presence ached.
It was the delirious hope that
tie-dyed daises would suddenly sprout
the world in glorious harmony for real;
the knowledge that was a child’s dream.
ButThatIsLife!
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**********************************************LIFE
So roll this psychedelic ink on paper
and tell me how good it feels.
- by Lovers Never Tell |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/31/2008 |
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- Title: Thought Destruction
- Artist: Lovers Never Tell
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a description. - Date: 07/31/2008
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- Spirit Crusher - 07/31/2008
- Let the words speak for themselves. Don't like the font get in the way...
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- Lovers Never Tell - 07/31/2008
- I just realized that my alignment was off and it won't let me change it! Sorry...
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- Hekibel - 07/31/2008
- I love this poem! It's insanely cool, with wicked format! 5/5!
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