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Deadly Thoughts
by Adam Davis
we all know how it feels to be alive
but how does it feel to be dead?
how does it feel to live underground
not breathing
or moving your head?
people say it's relaxing
people say it's rough
everytime i hear them say
"it makes me cough
because i feel like when i die
it would be the same
i'd be buried or burned in every way"
and when i
go to a grave
i look at the stone
it says "RIP Dave"
or some other name
and i don't feel pain...
but now i think
should i keep walking
through this depressing place
and pass by the names
that are written on these plates?
another question was
"how will i die?"
a very common question
that's been used as lies
people think
' gunshot, drowned,
car crash, found
and beat to death'
but what i think
i would die
in the year 2020
but it's all a lie
i would love to die young
where i can't grow old
and long to wish
that i died cold
in a wasteland
not far from home
but after you're done thinking about this
your thought is strong
enough to tear you apart
and you walk along
into the street...
- by Cyanide Wolf |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/03/2008 |
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- Title: Deadly Thoughts
- Artist: Cyanide Wolf
- Description: this is a poem i wrote because i was wondering how it would feel like if i died. many many questions are unanswered.
- Date: 08/03/2008
- Tags: wattobega
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Cyanide Wolf - 06/29/2009
- Lol...i'm glad this poem's still going xD
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- LawliUchiha - 06/28/2009
- I love it.
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- dreamygal90 - 01/19/2009
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I love the questions you bring up. These are all questions that probably come up all the time but we suppress because they're too scary to think about. Death is too scary to think about.
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- Roboticyouth - 01/19/2009
- TLTR
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- Emo_Cupcake1516 - 12/24/2008
- You deserve to have this poem put on a wall...Ans yet there are still questions like what does death feel like? What If you can't feel it O_o
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- Cyanide Wolf - 12/13/2008
- thanks guys!
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- Ryan Russell - 12/05/2008
- Awww. This is sad! OF course, its not like I don't write sad poems myself, but still...I like how you ended the poem since it points out that, no matter how much you fear or are mystified by death, you just have to go out and live your life! ^_^
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