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"The Way She Smiles"
I just love the way she smiles.
So pleasent so sweet.
Like to know her a while.
She is a girl any guy would like to meet
I almost had her.
I thought she was mine.
I made her pure.
Made her smile all the time.
This smile is decieving.
I cant tell if its a lie.
Her smiles so pleasing.
so wicked,it makes me wanna cry.
Her smile is cool,wicked,pure and sweet.
Whenever I see it, it sweeps me off my feet.
A Poem By,
Michael Telesca
- by Dragonskull933 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/14/2008 |
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- Title: Her smile...
- Artist: Dragonskull933
- Description: A poem I wrote during a tough time in my life.... Please leave positive comments and/or positive criticism...
- Date: 08/14/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Arekusandoria-san - 08/20/2010
- very nice but the use of smile was a little overpwering but still a beautiful poem. 5/5
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- Silvia135 - 07/22/2010
- Congratulations. This is really and truly a very beautiful, and above all very touching poem.I can not imagine yet how you must have been in love with her, if you devote her such a wonderful poem.
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- xXiDinoXx - 12/16/2008
- Thats a nice poem 5/5 hope u win n.n
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- xiiaopuffersx3 - 08/14/2008
- i hope i had that smile....^^
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