Mommy I Sinned

• Artist: AvianFlame
• Description: The Internal Contention of a Worldly Sinner
  
  ^Full Title because Gaia, like Deviant Art, is a pain about title length
• Date: 08/14/2008
• Tags: heretic heaven hell

From heaven to hell a heretic’s grace

Twisting the thoughts he has know for so long

Seeing himself in the good Lord’s face

He searches for answers that will sing out in song

For he stands at the edge of darkness to fall

But pride is a thing man has long known

To be saved is to cry out that God is his all

And ego prevents this acceptance of fault

So he locks up his doubts

In a deep hidden vault

And lives out in ease a life full of sin

Ignoring the goodness that cries from within

And fear of the sound of trumpets that blow

On judgment day when he’s thrown down below

And so he rejects and goes on his way

Believing only in earths present day

And as he lives sinning by and by

The tears of an angel falls from the sky

Comments

[Emo_Wuvs_Haylie]

yoru full title is kida stupid...mommy i have sinned is more attractive, but for this i would choose somethign sim,pler like "the sinners path" or "the sinners folly"

but anyway...great poem, i feel i relate to it in more ways than one, youshould check otu my pome "the ballad of life and death" and see prelude (maybe its life) i talked about a similar subject...great poem but i see a few lines that breaks your rhyming pattern so 4/5