drowning in memorys

• Artist: mystofmana
• Description: this poem is about drownding in memorys good and bad,and how the bad memorys weigh you down but you have to forget about them and move on and not let them weigh you down.
• Date: 08/22/2008
• Tags: memorys river hauntedbythepast

I am floating down a river
drowning in the ebbs of time
surrounded by memories
haunted by the past
I struggle for air
but the intangible weight
of my memories weight me down
I try to move but I cant because
the unbearable weight of my memories
bring me down

Comments

[Manther]

The first line made me think of "Aqueous Transmission" by Incubus.

[demon strait outta_hell]

U have misspelled words in ur description... drownding? Do you mean drowning? its okay. 4/5

[Madd Fail]

I love it! good job, 5/5 =]