Letting go

• Artist: azngrlxanime
• Description: i wrote this poem pretty much for fun... hope you like it
• Date: 09/01/2008
• Tags: letting

I'm alone
i can't seem to find a place
i can call home
you were there
but now you're gone
you were always right beside me

i could i let something so small
break us apart
didn't you know that you were breaking my heart
time is running out
i have to forget now
but it's not easy letting go

how long has it been
since the day
you told me that it was hopeless
that it was useless
that i should give up

yet i isn't so hard now
because time has pasted
my feelings for you didn't last
i've learned to let go....

Comments

[popsinger102]

lol to the person below,me but good job
its needs somthing i dont kno wat it is anyway
good work

[Ichigo2108]

oh nvm the people below me.......heheheheh viceversa.....lol >w<

[Ichigo2108]

yeah i agree w/ the person on top of me.... hi! i also agree w/ the person above the person on top of me. you could have made it better but it's good....hi! >w<

[Shieru Ritsuka]

thats really good but u could have made it much better but i liked it alot!! very good very good!! and i no u didnt write this for fun either u were venting and it came out good or u really do feel this way and somthing happened but u did a nice job good good job!

[Macabre_Words]

It doesnt seem like you wrote it for fun.... it looks like you took it out of your heart.