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The night you said I'll be there
I now try not to give a care.
you took my heart,
Pierced it with a dart.
I left it with you
the key with you too.
you broke it
left it in a pit.
now I sit here with a broken heart
And a big tear
- Title: Broken hearts
- Artist: Wolfcry98
- Description: ...Mostly about a girl whose heart was broken by a guy...
- Date: 09/11/2008
- Tags: broken hearts
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Redragonfiregrl - 12/15/2008
- yes try and not go for the simple rhymes but indeed try and write with your heart in a very indirect kind of way of saying things.
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- God Is A PopStar - 09/11/2008
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I have a little something to say, but Gaia says that what I have to say is to long, so I will not say it.
Work harder on it, avoid simple rhymes - Report As Spam
- Wolfcry98 - 09/11/2008
- hey um this is my first poem so don't blame me if it is not that good.
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