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I thought I saw a mermaid
When I was by the sea
Before she dove into the surf
She turned and winked at me!
- Title: Mermaid
- Artist: Hiraetha
- Description: It's a cute, one-stanza poem about sighting a mermaid
- Date: 09/14/2008
- Tags: mermaid
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Comments (6 Comments)
- srs diva 2011 xxl - 12/27/2008
- Good poem. Classic one liners!
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- Hiraetha - 11/13/2008
- Why does everyone think quantity of words makes a good piece? Why should I say the same thing in five stanzas when I can say it more effectively with the mood I intended in one?
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- Hiraetha - 09/22/2008
- Uhm, yeah. Can I say one thing to the general public? Long words, fancy words, and lots of words, don't always equal the best words. Get that into your heads, will ya!?
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- Kirylux_x - 09/14/2008
- Linda Short But Nice Peotry
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- Sloth Pirate - 09/14/2008
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It's really short, it's sucks, it's no good.
You should grab it and shove it down ur trash can. - Report As Spam
- Epic Flawless - 09/14/2008
- It's too short for my liking but at least it makes sense. Try to extend it.
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