Leave A Trace

• Artist: bleedingxaddiction
• Description: I've entered this text to see how good my writing really is.
  It's a few months old, and I wrote it in the hardest week of my life.
  I know it's not my best, but evidently, you don't know.
  And probably don't care.
  Just be honest, don't 10 me if you don't mean it.
  And if you have any advice about my writing, please PM me.
  
  Thank you.
• Date: 09/26/2008
• Tags: leave trace

I thought this would be over by now
But these doubts are so frustrating
Having lost you, hoping you´ll return
From never, this love is desecrating
Tired of hoping, sick of dreaming
Praying he isn't who you really want
Burning 'till you return to me, my love
So pointless, for I desire you not

So we left a trace
Of my life behind
In a forgotten place
Where love lied

I think maybe I wasted
The best of my love, my life
The feelings I've tasted
Will never turn out alright

I believed in you, in your honesty
I had faith in our thing for ever
Love turns out to be so deceiving
The love forever, but chances never
I know this'll never turn out ok
No chance that we could fix this
I think you're too blind to see
At least it's good for great lyrics

So we left a trace
Of my life behind
In a forgotten place
Where love lied

I think maybe I wasted
The best of my love, my life
The feelings I've tasted
Will never turn out alright

And now this is how it'll end
Both denying, and suppressing
Maybe we should let it out
It could be so damned relaxing
But it's never gonna happen
We'll never make up our minds
We're just friends, was said
Forever ******** up this time

I thought this would be over by now
But these doubts are so frustrating
Having lost you, hoping you´ll return
From never, this love is desecrating
I know this'll never turn out ok
No chance that we could fix this
I think you're too blind to see
At least it's good for great lyrics

So we left a trace
Of my life behind
In a forgotten place
Where love lied

I think maybe I wasted
The best of my love, my life
The feelings I've tasted
Will never turn out alright

So we leave a trace
Of my life behind
In the forgotten place
Where my love lied

Comments

[Captain Arto]

It is really good I mean it.

[papershelf i c i c l e s]

i liked it. very well written. nice use of "desecrating" razz anywho, keep it up, id love to read more from you.