let it die

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: ok its a poem about when i was once in a plane and i was writing in my diary and how i was thinking about what would happen if i died and how no one but me knew what i was saying or thinking about in my diary.i know this poem sounds like i cut myself i dont so dont go thinking i do please, its just a poem.please comment and rate
• Date: 10/02/2008
• Tags: armbloodbleedgrounddieday

in a plane sat a girl
unknowing to that world she was writing in her diary
break, break
break my skin
break my bones
break me down to the ground

let them scream
let them shout
until the day i die i will indeed

break my skin
break my bones
break me down to the ground

let me bleed
let me watch my blood drip from my skin
across my arm
down to the ground

Comments

[Daddy Got This Account]

really deep, i love te whole poem. it describes alot. it made me tear up because thats how i feel sometimes. 5/5

[xretarded_muffinsx]

wow this is really good. and im sorry yu thought
that while in a plane. and its just good!

[XxdeadxnxgonexX]

I rather enjoyed. I think it was something that could possibly see myself wondering too... But I don't have a diary so I can't relate all the way. xD

IGNORE Summer_Fall_Winter_Spring!! She's just upset cuz she's a no talent hack job that has to put other people's poems down to make herself feel better.

[T A S T Y Y]

ignore it.
it was beautiful.
but no, seriously, IGNORE HER xD

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

So you want reasons.

You're talking about how sad you are. Boo hoo. There's no point. You don't give any reason you're sad, make any statement about life. It's "wah wah wah, my parents don't love me" or whatever your brand of razor is.

This sort of poem is better suited for your journal, rather than a Poetry Arena, where you are SUPPOSED to try. This is emo angst, and it disgusts me on every level of my being.

Is that clear enough?

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

So . . . you wrote this cliched, hackneyed poem that doesn't even represent you, and nothing even happened. You were just complaining.

Please go burn your diary for making you write this. If that doesn't work, burn yourself as well.