Whatever u say

• Artist: DivineXLover
• Description: I just wrote this poem cause me and my gf sorta got into a fight and well i called her back apologizing and she said that she'll call me back in fivem minutes and i know shell take forever i dont know mabey she dosent care, plus i know this poem kinda sucks but im pissed!
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: whatever

Whenever you try something to make it better
you make it worse
the problems that are held within
everything around us killing us within
tiredness is a trend
more and more
time i spend
draging my feet
not knowing what to say
wtf mabey i should say
i want to give up
those words make me so blind
inside i feel like you care less
i try and try
ill call you back in five...
those words you say
hurt more and more
but ******** this im tired
i dont want to say
but ******** im done
away!

Comments

[Raziel Nephilim]

This sounds like a poem of grief. Apparently your gf doesn't understand that she's hurting you. What's ironic is that this was posted on my b-day wink

[Xelyn Craft]

I don't think it suks, It's honest and I wish there were more writers that spoke there mind lyk u did. I hope things get better with u and ur gf.

[soulcasters]

to tell you the thruefed you spoke your heart out am amased on how peapple dont nottise the pain of others you can be dien inside of you and they stilll wont care for they never seam to care is as if you never exsistted bot for me as a friend you do exsist for me you are not alone you have me as your friendand for your girll talk to her tell her how you feal am sure ahe will understand you are never alone remember that hey can you please add me as your friend please thank you