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Dampening dreams
Vehement voices
strangely speaking
Rancor rites
From far-off
Placid places
Unbecoming unaggressive
Fire forging
heated hatred
Unforgiving uniformed
Protesters pacing
Chanting contention
Between beliefs
Filching freedom
Dampening dreams
Crazed cretins
stealing sovereignty
For feelings
Unknown uncaring
Only one
Mind monitoring
Gathering gangs
Controlling contemplation
Forcing Faith
Opaquing opinion
Converting convictions
Forever failing
Sacrificing self
In response to the first comment:
The point was to use simple combinations of words to paint a picture, and the picture is an angry mob of people violently protesting, and trying to steal everyones rights and forcing them conform to their will, while they themselves have no will. 'One mind', one person in control, and they fail themselves because they do not remain true to themselves, 'Forever Failing Sacrificing self', being led like blind sheep for something they don't fully understand. The tie in you refer to is in every stanza, repeating the subject, stealing rights, forcing opinions. And yes it does sound like a string of random words, but even they can paint a picture clear enough to those who know how to see. Poetry follows no form, it is a direct reflection of the souls desire, in whatever way it is portrayed, or painted is no issue.
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- Title: Dampening Dreams
- Artist: Master Constantine
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- Date: 10/06/2008
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- Drakansa - 10/06/2008
- The alliteration is nice, but too limiting when used like this, in my opinion. I'd like to see more of something else thrown in there to tie it together. As is it just feels like a string of random words.
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