Love

• Artist: mely252
• Description:
  ok this is a poem i made up i hope you like it if you do say something nice to make me happy about it.
  
  
• Date: 10/09/2008
• Tags: love

*****LOVE*****
Love what is it
Love why do we need it
Love everyone wants it
Love something that will break your heart
Love hard looking for
Love beautiful when found

by mely252

Comments

[Queen Hexagon]

its ok but it needs to flow. did you mean "break" or "brake". i like "brake" because its like a play on words as in it would stop your heart like a brake would...