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The hard fought battles of war stain the iron sheath in which a soldier wears...
But not the sword in which slays the soldier. The golden sword may kill the soldier...but the blood from the soldier dripping on the sword will make a crimson stream glimmering from from the tides of war. And as the sun rises there will be no hope for those who have given birth to the disaster of the sword that has slain the soldier...and all that will be left is a stream of crimson and the shimmering listless stare from the golden sword, thus refracting the light from the sun....creating a Crimson Dawn.
- Title: Crimson Dawn & Golden Sword
- Artist: 0MBU
- Description: The Life of War and all of its pain...
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: crimson dawn golden sword
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- Angel_Dancer87 - 10/13/2008
- The only thing I can find that you might want to change is to take out the second from in the third line of your poem. Aside from that it's very gripping and emotional, wonderful job.
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