untitteled (sry)

• Artist: xTheWiltedRosex
• Description:
• Date: 10/13/2008
• Tags: sorrow

The wind was strong,
The night was long.
The ground was soaked in dew,
That's when I spotted you.
Perfect in every way,
In night, you seemed like day.
A crash of thunder.
A streak of light.
I ran to you with all my might.
No good it did,
Because I slid.
"No!" I called as you fled,
I felt my head to finde I've bled.
"Come with me" I perswaded,
Even though we both were dated.
You ran away,
You could never stay.
From a path I ever did stray,
"Why?" I ask each day.

Comments

[Roberto Snout]

untitteled (sry)???? 2/5. i good poem needs a good name:/

[mexicantacos2003]

it lost rhythm at the word perswaded.
not because its misspelled but because of the amount of syllables
its still very good.
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[dratina92]

awesome poem 5/5