wouldn't you?

• Artist: puhlayed
• Description: i just wrote this 2day.. mom found out i was sexually active and chyea... it was a fast poem so its not as good..
• Date: 10/13/2008
• Tags: wouldntyou

Mom do you think less of me?

Am i not the daughter you once had?

I want to apologize cause your the best mom i'll ever have,

I didn't want to tell you because i was afraid,

i wanted to but couldn't,

my heart is distant, its out of range,

I'm sorry I didn't tell you but would you have told your mom?

If you were me, 15 of age, wouldn't your heart tell you to stop?

Wouldn't you be afraid that your mom wouldn't be the same?

I'm sorry i didn't tell you i guess that I'm ashamed,

i dont want you to think that this is all your fault,

i take Full responsibility but my heart is at a hault,

*sigh* i feel as if things will now be differen in so many ways,

please don't send me away....

please tell me that I can stay....

just things have been going wrong and i guess this is what i'll say,

even if you dis-own me all i'll do is pray,

pray that you wont think that i am just a slut,

Its a slap to the face telling me to "shut the ******** up."

But do what ever you please because i have no more to say...

but i just wanted to tell you... Luis is the only one who can brighten my day..

Comments

[Kgirl07]

Very touching *sniff*, but the swearing part when you say the F-word kinda spoils it....

[ll Tears of Joy ll]

Its a great poem

[puhlayed]

thank you =]

[Moosh123]

That's beautiful

[mexicantacos2003]

well your awfully open about this
eh what the hell
your just kids
you make mistakes
your mom wouldn't (or shouldn't) drop her support on you
in fact the opposite
that's what makes a good parent
but i wont judge her
ill judge this poem


very neat
very "clingy"
i just had to read it till the end
its a good poem for girls in the same place as yourself
(and moms so that they open their eyes and realize that their children aren't kids anymore)