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the days i wait for u
to return is agonizing
the time i spend looking
out the window is boring
the minutes i wait by the phone
wishing u would call
the seconds i hold my breathe
everytime i answer the phone
the hours i wait to see if i can die
the months i stay on the computer
waiting for u too email me
the years i watch t.v.
to pass the time faster
the time i wait and wait and wait
theres no time left now
cos i have wasted all my time
waiting for u to come to ur senses
day in and day out
u still haven't come to ur senses
cos ur still not here
the years i've waited
for u to return
the time i've always thought
that u would come back and hug me in ur arms
so i feel safe again
so i feel safe forever
- by The_unborn_sin |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/13/2008 |
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- Title: Time
- Artist: The_unborn_sin
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Description:
its a goos poem i wrote
alot of ppl liked it
and i hope some ppl on here will too
:) - Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: time
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xXX_iNomNom_XXx - 07/12/2009
- *claps*
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- iBrightScales - 10/14/2008
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The poem itself is good, but your grammar is horrid.
Please, use whole words and correct spelling the next time you submit a poem. - Report As Spam
- audioVixen - 10/14/2008
- It's good and I love the meaning in it but it would be better if you would spell out your words. Literacy is very important in poetry. smile ~Kitty
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- soy kreu - 10/14/2008
- waiting, wishing, and hoping. that's all part of the package when you're in love.
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- Kamikaze-Janie808 - 10/14/2008
- sad poem, I can feel the longing in the words..keep up the nice work.
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- PietroTheHighSeraph - 10/14/2008
- Wow. Great poem. Ubber emotional!
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- Hobbit Habit - 10/14/2008
- nice!!!! perfect
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