If You Were My Teddy..

• Artist: Jess 1 Beast
• Description: A Poem I Made Last Year..
  Tell Me What You Think..
• Date: 10/26/2008
• Tags: were teddy

If You Were My Teddy I'd Hold You Tight,
To Keep Me Warm Throughout The Night,
I'll Hold You Tight And Never Let Go,
That's All That You Need To Know,
Hold You Close To My Heart,
I Know Nothing Will Ever Tear Us Apart,
This Is What Love Makes Me Do,
The Right Time For Me To Say "I LOVE YOU!"

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

Nice! good job! In the future, you could muddle up the rhyming scheme a little , and it'll be more interesting. Not that it ISN'T interesting, or anything. (it's just a bit of... what's it called? Constructive critisism?). It's stillamazing! biggrin