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Tell me your secrets
I'll cover the lies
stop the whispering
silence your sighs
The words on the walls
so many, so small
when no one is listening
singing them all
your taunted
tainted
covered with their thoughts
of life without you
so untamed.
faded paragraphs
filled with your words
of treachery, deceit,
listen and learn.
stained, scarred,
frightened by this,,
surrounded by laughing
in unholy bliss
your faint,
a whisper,
unseen by all those
who pass
so unknowing.
short and simple,
like a song,
listen to all
your rights and wrongs
when it begins,
soon, it ends,
and if it comes to you
it comes from them.
- by Halo of Stars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/04/2008 |
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- Title: Secrets
- Artist: Halo of Stars
- Description: This is a poem I wrote about a week or two ago, I think. This is the first one I've ever posted on gaia, so please, don't be rude just to be rude; if you are going to be rude, make it constructive criticism.
- Date: 11/04/2008
- Tags: secrets
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Halo of Stars - 11/11/2008
- biggrin thanks. ^3^
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- Pet_Detective84 - 11/11/2008
- well to be honest i kinda zoned out about 1/2 way through.....so with that said.....not bad
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- Icyflash - 11/10/2008
- rhythm is great
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- Rose1386 - 11/08/2008
- I must say I love it!
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- tksunshine93 - 11/04/2008
- oooo!!! i like!!! i like the rhythm brava!!
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- S_R_R_R - 11/04/2008
- It is good
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- xxkatie_in_th3_mom3ntomxx - 11/04/2008
- it,s really good
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