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heart The Land is my heart, the Moon is my soul, heart
The Door is the pain, recovery's the Key,
And everything He threw away...
All belonged to Me...
The Land is barren, cold and vast
Where everything joins from the present and past.
It constantly changes, each season a joy
But only one person owns it, a very special Boy.
The land of my Heart is frozen and cold
Locked by a Door with a Key so old.
And try as I might to open the door,
The effort just Pains me all the more...
One day the Key came on wings of Hope
To Erase my Troubles-I couldn't cope.
But the ribbon snapped and the key was Lost,
So my heart lost all warmth and turned to Frost.
Stuck in this land, I continue to Cry,
Searching for Hope, I look to the Sky.
The Moon looked back at me, veiled in Light,
But I felt nothing but Sorrow; Suffering at night.
When will the day come
Where everything will me Fine?
No heart could experience this Pain,
No heart but Mine.
There's a virus that intrudes, like the Sun up above,
It's earned a well-known name; the name of Love.
It's beautiful in ways, and sometimes it's not.
But to me it's just plain Hideous- it caused my heart to Rot.
There's no point in waiting for the Key anymore
Because I've already walked out of the door.
And the constant Whispers I seem to hear
Have been replaced by Silence in my ear.
As for the Boy that owned this Land,
He sealed it shut with his own hand.
And the harsh words he spoke weren't heard from afar,
But will effect this Land and leave a deep scar.
- by SukiNaromi |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/12/2008 |
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- Title: Captivated Heart
- Artist: SukiNaromi
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Description:
This is a poem I wrote after my boyfriend broke up with me... I dedicate this to everyone else who feels hurt by the person you loved but didn't love back.
The part in italics describes the important parts of the poem to fully understand what it means.
I wrote this during school, so it was somewhat rushed (my teachers thought I was writing a note to someone.) but I would like you to criticize anyway to help me improve my writing. - Date: 11/12/2008
- Tags: captivated heart love feelings relationship
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Comments (6 Comments)
- princess ai rules - 12/10/2009
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I love this poem so much.
It made me cry. - Report As Spam
- x-DopeSwaqqa - 02/19/2009
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I love it so much!!! It's so emotional!!!! so you got 5/5 to me
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- star_gal13 - 01/30/2009
- love it so much... u r such a great writer!!!
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- Dragonair Draco - 11/15/2008
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I LUV IT!!!! SO EMO!!!! EVEN IF U DIDN'T TRY 2 MAKE IT THAT WAY!!!! BORN WRITER!!!! Lol, soz. it was gud
..... (smacks herself round the face 4 bein an idiot) - Report As Spam
- SukiNaromi - 11/14/2008
- Btw I'm sorry if there are any grammatical mistakes, I didn't get a chance to check it right away...
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- Littlepurplestars - 11/13/2008
- it's good. sad. im not the type that likes rhyming poems but i think you did it very well.
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