heres three of my pomes

• Artist: - iQuit l3itch
• Description: 1.dreams dreams dreams
  this on was wrote to inspire you and have faitth
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  2.dont give up yet / childs hands
  this on was wrote for my mommy r.i.p
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  3.lets wait for eachother
  ok people # 3 i did not write i just really like it
• Date: 11/24/2008
• Tags: heres three pomes

1. dreams dreamms dreams
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dreams are a wonderful thing ,there questnig fantisys
some times u want them to come true sometimes u dont ,
if u live up to those dreams ,u have hope and faith in ur self
so dream big live long

2. dont give up / childs hands
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life is like a rag doll in a childs hands you'll be torn you'll be thrown you'll cry you'll sigh BUT YET you'll be hugged kissed and loved DONT GIVE UP YET R.I.P mommy i will always love u i will never give up

3.lets wait for eachother
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i may not get to see u as often as i like. i may not get to hold u all through the nite. but deep in my heart i truly know, your the one that i love , and I CANT LET U GO. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Comments

[- iQuit l3itch]

yes people i did not make the last one i just forgot to say that srry!!!!!!!
but the rest i did make yes i suck ,but i dont give a s**t!

[XxXibladeXxX]

overall
pretty good
4/5
but wat the prsn on top said is tru

[l-lookah]

dang sis i new you liked poetry but not lik dat

[x-Mrs-Binky]

umm the last was already made...sry!!