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There are those who speak,
But yet cannot be heard.
There are those who breath,
But yet cannot live.
Many of us try,
And many of us fail.
Many of us get left behind,
But thats fine, because it what makes many of us strong.
Sing until your lungs explode.
Run until you collaps and hit the ground.
Draw to the point your tears are their own art work.
Write until your hearts emotions are no more.
Because it's what makes you different.
I just want you to know
I can hear you,
I can see you,
I believe in you,
Because I am you.
- Title: I am you
- Artist: Jazman-2
- Description: This is a peom i wrote a while ago. May not be that great, which is why i would like other opinions on this and how i could fix it
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: iamyou
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Comments (2 Comments)
- purple monkeys in a train - 11/29/2008
- I like the idea, some word changes could take place, but other wise, very nice. easy to relate to.
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- Galloping_Ginger - 11/29/2008
- hmm pretty cool-ish 4/5
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