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Let the rain fall down.
Let it wake my dreams.
Remember me tonight when you're asleep.
Maybe I will, maybe I won't.
You're so very special.
Catching all the lights.
The stars fall onto you.
In bed I lay.
Nothing on, but your T-shirt.
I'm asleep and all I dream of is you.
Or am I awake?
It's nights like these that we all love living.
And we can pop bottles all night long.
Our hearts—dark as the rain.
Lights go out and I can't be saved.
No room for self these days.
I see you've been walking through the night.
In my head, in the rain.
It's so dark.
Let the rain fall down.
Or I've wasted it all just to watch you go.
- Title: Am I asleep or am I awake?
- Artist: iKeety
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Description:
Umm. I took a bunch of lyrics from songs and pulled them together into a poem. Funny enough I played my songs by random and picked a line I liked. I don't think I'm all that great, but I'm interested on taking poetry classes or something. Think I should? >_<
Much thanks to the bands or groups. (wouldn't let me type them. it was too long.) - Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: asleep awake
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Comments (6 Comments)
- purplemajic - 04/09/2009
- Wow! I love it! Great Job!
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- Phemonoe - 12/22/2008
- Oh, Keety. It's so cute, I love it <3
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- iKeety - 12/04/2008
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o-o lol.
Ninja~ you made me feel a lot better about myself.
Munchy~ omfg tytyty. <3 - Report As Spam
- the dark wound within me - 12/04/2008
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- iMunchMoofin - 12/03/2008
- i Love it. ;D very nice, good job. 5/5 :3
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- iKeety - 12/01/2008
- Meh. ^^; I suck.
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