This Boy...

• Artist: Rook219
• Description: Well.. Horrible? Yeah, I know...
  I just want to see what you guys think,
  comment plz O^O
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags:

Empty conversations,
Shallow friends,
Whithered heart,
Weary soul...

This is how he's traveled,
No friends have been attached,
To this simple-minded boy...
Never has he been,
Warmed or welcomed...
Never has he been,
Loved or befriended...
Never has he seen the light of day,
Only the dark of night...

And to this boy,
Your arms have been stretched...
To this boy,
You've brought in the sunlight...
To this boy,
You've given,
A full heart,
And a rested soul...

Comments

[mlover4evr]

hey, this isnt horrible, this is one of my faves now. u rated one of mine (not in death to be specific) and i check out ur stuff and i luv it all, especially this 1. 5/5

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

its not horrible, its really good ^^

[Jeyrin]

I really like it ^_^ I liked "A moments reminiscing" so I had to check this out. 5/5, DUH! Hehe, I'm listening to Loud Machines by The Less, and, strangely, it helps with the mood. BTW, if you didn't know, this is my main account. The mule is Nikki4815 >.< In case you forgot.

[whitejade13]

Oh this is wonderful!I really love it! smile

[xFallen-Shadow-Wolfx]

i really liked it...its kinda weird to say this but it's true about me what it says in the poem sweatdrop ....5/5

[vampiregirl98]

Wow this was really deep, i enjoyed reading it and can not stop reading it over and over again. To me, the poem really seemed to of flowed and the feeling it gave off appeared strong. biggrin