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A man is down
On luck and hope
Another man
Tries to help him cope
Try once
He cried
Try twice
He cried
Try thrice
He died
Spare useless words
More people will live longer
- Title: Spare The Words
- Artist: Syrinick
- Description: A small bit.......not much though
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: spare words
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Nikki4815 - 12/08/2008
- I like the way it flows. 4/5. Rate back? Check out my gallery ^^
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- IndigoKnives - 12/07/2008
- Good. I like the flow 3/5
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- Syd_Sage - 12/06/2008
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i like it...think it is pretty cool!! my kind of poem~.~
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