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No One Knows
No one knows what it's like to cry the way I do.
No one knows how to be ture.
No one knows what it's like to be me.
No one can see,
What happens inside me.
I cry,
I'm deystroyed and broken.
This is not a token.
I feel no joy.
I've been played like a toy.
You just don't know what I go through.
The pain of not being with you.
It kills me inside.
I'm just trying to get by.
Time goes on,
Life goes on,
The world keeps going.
But I,
Stay behind.
I'm alone and broken.
No one cares.
This is too much to bare.
I can't take it anymore.
I've been tore.
Even my mind is sore.
I'm not alive.
Or at least not in the inside....
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- by I M i x e d Emotions I |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: No One Knows
- Artist: I M i x e d Emotions I
- Description: this is a poem i wrote out of agony and pain...
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: knows
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Romanchikku na Zetsubou - 01/08/2009
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Sometimes the world just gets you down.
All you have to do is deal with it! I almost always feel like that.
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mmm...Pretty good. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Piano Kisses - 12/15/2008
- It's very emotional, and I enjoy that. My only problem is the rhyming was too easy. Explore rhymes more and get something much deeper in meaning smile
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- ZombieSlayer xD - 12/09/2008
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Woah. Heavy.
I like it. C: - Report As Spam
- SmileCute12 - 12/07/2008
- girl this is amazing =]
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- Uniquelin of the World - 12/07/2008
- nice and i like how it rhyms ;3 with my poems i write mostly from my pain but i can't write poems that rhym so 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Gerard_Ray_Frank - 12/07/2008
- Slightly repetitive but very well written. Good job!
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