Freedom

• Artist: Cassius Black
• Description: I dont really know how to describe this one except that I felt really good when I wrote it.
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: freedom

She stands alone in the darness
The moonlight covers her silouhette like a veil
She's weeping, yet she's happy
In the distance she hears her heart
Its calling to her to return
But she's no longer going in that direction
She gazes down at the cliff she's on
Tippy-toes on the ledge
The ocean looks back up at her and smiles
Over the edge she plummets with outstretched arms
Eyes wide open she falls
Wind gusts and blows her all around
She laughs as the waters edge tickles her senses
There's a sploosh as she tumbles into the water
Before rising and spreading her wings

Comments

[Xialliest]

I like it, but you have a lot of spelling mistakes, and a lot of your grammar is messed up. But still good 3/5 because of your mistakes.

[The Love of Money]

Wow, that's beautiful. 5/5

[Really Rad]

Wow '-'
Touching
5/5