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On a windy November day, I saw you and had nothing to say.
You looked deeply into my eyes, and suddenly my stomach filled with butterflies.
When I didn’t fit in, with everyone there, you had me put on your hat and acted like you actually care.
You let me lay my head on your shoulder, and held my hand during the night when the air got colder.
Even when I took your jacket, you didn’t complain, you just smiled and probably thought, wow, that girl must be insane.
You acted so sweet and kissed me goodnight, and all I wanted from that point on was for you to hold me tight.
I can’t believe I found a guy like you, the man of dreams, and the one I love so true.
- by un3dead3spirit3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: You
- Artist: un3dead3spirit3
- Description: I usually write love poems... that rhyme....anyway, this was written about my bf and the day we met.
- Date: 12/08/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lord Angel of Shadows - 12/09/2008
- I love you,babe this is a nice peom an i love it to death^-^
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- HeartScribblez - 12/09/2008
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So sweet and emotional! It's good you write poems when you feel love this way, you can always look back at them and relive every second. Wonderful job!
Thank you for the sweet comment on my poem "Paper Dolls" . It's greatly appreciated. smile - Report As Spam
- nksnoopy - 12/09/2008
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Wow that was really good!
ps: thnx for commenting on my poem. - Report As Spam
- amythyst crystal - 12/09/2008
- Wow spectacular!!!!
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