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Pain
Pain is what I feel When you say goodbye
Pain would be in me if our love ever died
Pain shoots up as the bullet shoots through to the ground
What made you want to shoot
How bad did you want to say goodbye
My love will linger by your bedside
Suicide of the soul
Suicide of the heart
This brings definite homicide of my feelings for you
No longer can I think how you thought
Love how you loved
Never again will you be the one I sought to love
Because you are no more
And your death will not kill me
- Title: Pain
- Artist: Zeelora
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Description:
I wrote this poem this poem about 2 years ago.
I was in a very depressed state trying to pull through!
Last year I submitted it to the "International Poetry Society"
I got an "Editors Choice" award for it, and I became one of the "Poets Of The Year" for the year 2007! - Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: pain love relationships suicide
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Zeelora - 12/09/2008
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Thanks lots!
I was shocked myself about the award! - Report As Spam
- jojs_97 - 12/09/2008
- WOW!! that's a great poem. i love it. and congrats on the award thing. that's awsome. love the poem.
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- Zeelora - 12/09/2008
- Thank you!!!!
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- Criminal Crescendo - 12/09/2008
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wow! thats deep and GOOD! i really like it and i can see why it was chosen as editor's choice! congrats!
5000/5 lol. good luck! biggrin - Report As Spam
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