Dream

• Artist: Ember Delano
• Description: There's not much I can say about this poem I mean I was feeling creative and I wanted to put that creativity into words and this is what came out. I love all feedback good or bad so feel free to comment, I mean it's the only way I can improve. I apologize for any spelling and/or grammar errors.
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: dream

If you hold onto a dream too long, it loses it's hold on you.
So dream but once of me, my dear
and never again travel here.
See me once and then never again.
I will not hold you...I will not try.
For keeping you here you will surely die.
I would rather suffer my pain alone.
Then to hold you here 'til your not but bone.
So dream but once of me, my dear.
Then never again travel here.

Comments

[Dreamer_Brittany]

epic

[Bioku luna]

I truly loved it I mean it was sad but I loved it