what would u do?

• Artist: TheLastDarkHeartedAngel
• Description: this poem is ment for people that really doesnt care about any thing to make them think about the natral wonders of life
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: would

What would u do if life ended to soon?
What would u do if I was never there?
What would u do if tomorrow never came?
What would u do if the world was black and white
and u found a rose so red and full of life?
Would u pick it so it will die or would u leave it so it will bloom?
What would u do if tomorrow was the end of time
if tomorrow was the end of days
if tomorrow was the end of life if tomorrow was just the end of all that u knew?
What would u do?

Comments

[DramaDork372]

very deep
good job

[Twighlight Cloud]

that was vary good that well make people think

[0Erotic1Cookies0]

kool,it was deep,im like that.thats what i think of...

[SquidIt]

Very deep.
Only one thing: Spelling mistakes.
Tomorrow was spelled incorrectly, and the beginning of each line wasn`t capitalized... but um... I'll let you get a good mark :/

[xXThe_King_of_BoredXx]

very deep 5/5

[sweet angel of the night]

so deep!

[Twin Entity]

You'll never know that you miss it until it's gone.

;3