My crying mind...

• Artist: Mimi Akimi
• Description: The result of the sadness in the world on the human body.
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: crying mind

My body, filled up with tears.
My soul, a whiff of neon.
My heartbeat, a distorted cry which calls for salvation.
My eyes burn like blazing fire, as if they wanted to see nothing anymore.
My mouth, sealed.
My ears, protesting against absurdity.
My tongue, paralized by the bitterness of life.
My skin, etched by contact with humans.
My only dream ... only possible with my end.

Comments

[290DarkStars]

sounds like an on-off view of intersession (aka-being immersed in the presence of God) but I do like your poem... Ill give it a 3/5. Not because I dont like it, but only because it confused me a lot. But this is a suggestion as well, I hope you post more and better stuff as I am. God Bless