Invasion

• Artist: Only Becca
• Description: A poem I wrote for my friend Andrew in February of this year. Er, or, about him. Aheh. x3
  
  Comment and critique or I'll kill you. *nodnod*
• Date: 12/21/2008
• Tags: invasion

You capture my thoughts
Invade my mind, my dreams
I'm torn, I'm caught
It's not as simple as it seems

I can't decide - right or left
My music cannot calm
Logic from my mind is swept
I held the answer in my palm

Stolen away, lost and gone
A story once written is erased
Is it dusk or is it dawn
My rational thought misplaced

Trusting, talking into the late hour
Not sure who to believe
Under the cover should I cower
Whilst I my conscience retrieve?

Lost or found can I not say or tell
Opened eyes or darkened soul
Am I sick or am I well
Does the path lead toward the goal

Tortured by myself, my own
Within my heart of hearts
Cannot see the light which shone
For the fog and cloud which starts

See the frenzied confusion
Blame cast inwardly
Where there once was union
Shattered so easily

Comments

[iiAyame]

That's REALLY good! 10/10

[Only Becca]

Heh. Thanks.
(None. It's hard to kill people through a computer screen. x-x)

[Deadcant_Closed]

Quite like it.
(Hm. How many did you kill so far? =o )