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Escape
You see him creeping by the Church
He's been alone for a year
Sorrow robbed him of his senses
He sleeps every night by her stone
By the bells there sleeps a stone
Which I alone can read
On the fence the red
Which at the time had been your Heart
Fear speared on that fence
I dig down every night
To see what remains
From the face that smiled for me
By the bells I spend the night
There amongst the snails, a lonely beast
During the day I run after the night
You escape me for a second time
With my hands I dig deep
To find what I miss so much
When the moon is out
I kiss your cold lips
I embrace you
But your skin rips like paper
And parts fall down from you
You escape me for the second time
By the bells I spend the night
There amongst the snails, a lonely beast
During the day I run after the night
You escape me for a second time
- by Victor_Creed |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/23/2008 |
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- Title: Escape
- Artist: Victor_Creed
- Description: A sad poem written a few years ago by myself.
- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: escape
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Comments (2 Comments)
- carosene - 02/27/2009
- Cool! Very creepy in a definitely good way, your repetition is fantastic and enhance the feeling of being trapped in this poem. My only criticism is your opening stanza: It seems a bit random, the swapping of the narrators and stuff. While it sets the setting, I think it'd be better if you had the man narrate this stanza too.
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- Mutandanstan - 01/18/2009
- that is a nice poem^^I like the stanzas and how it flows, good job.
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