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The Needle Lies
Festering wounds, born of pain,
pain is the pleasure and torture the treasure,
Broken brow, crying tears,
shaking, damaged goods,
clenched teeth, rigid, forlorn,
mental state decline,
whispers in the woods, screams in the air,
life force drains into a pool of coagulation,
sickening laughter, thoughts hereafter,
raining poison from a hundred black-cloud holes,
screeching nails, devastation,
logical decapitation,
short of breath, pounding jackhammer heart,
yesterdays lunch is on the floor...
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/26/2008 |
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- Title: The Needle Lies
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Queensryche reference
- Date: 12/26/2008
- Tags: needle lies
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Marionette_Mentation - 01/24/2009
- this puts many things in to persepective that some would have never thought of! i rly liked it! ^.^ comment back plz.
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- iiReina - 12/29/2008
- OMG!! this makes everything sound painful and bloody! like a dream...then at the end, everything pops back into reality or something. that's how i think about it. 5/5
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- x__C r e a m - C h i - 12/28/2008
- Wow........5/5
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- Bleuraven123 - 12/26/2008
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er, wonderful! yes, indeed!!
but I think "breathe" should be spelled "breath"... =D biggrin - Report As Spam