Night Stalker

• Artist: Tea Party Massacres
• Description: Some crappy emo-sounding poem I wrote at two in the morning. I seriously don't know why I'm submitting this, it sucks.
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: night stalker vampire blood chomp

Sleek and pale with eyes so bright

I stalk my prey and then take flight

Through the village I will glide

What good to you is it to hide?

Consent is something we do not know

so come along, enjoy the show

Join us now in our league of night

so that I may please, take a bite.

Comments

[The Quotient of 42 and 0]

Five stars for the rhymes that make sense and never sound pushed, but mostly because you recognize that this does kind of sound like one of those emo poems that I, too, hate to no end. I hope people see that some writers of even just one dark fantasy poem are conscious and honest enough to recognize it in a side note with the poem, cause when you do that, even some pretty bad emo poetry can be somewhat enjoyable or at least a time killer P:

[vampire creep in hiding]

awesome

[Dark-Fox-1401]

Not Bad

[kittykatdemon56565]

Actually its petty good..and now i know im not the only one who writes poetry at 2:00

[SmileCute12]

oh thats really good ^.^

[Paper Crane Kiko]

n it doesnt! its awesome!