Just Stay!!!

• Artist: Madame Dark Raven
• Description: this is a random writing that came to me recently when i fell in love again
• Date: 12/31/2008
• Tags: stay just

i've said my goodbyes and now it's time you did too
my heart belongs to another and my soul too
wish there was something i could do
but there really isn't anything i can do

gone for good
that's where i am
nothing to bring be back
nor keep me there

floating round waiting for the end to come
someone, anyone, please come and help me

wait, just hold on, here he comes
my guardian angel here to save me
why?, why have u been gone?
Where have you been my whole life?

where were you all this time
please don't leave me
I don't want to be left alone again
I don't want to be hurt again

won't you stay
make my heart your home
All you have to do is just stay
And then from there we'll live on

Comments

[Madame Dark Raven]

i'm ok. it was a long time ago when i wrote that. more like a lifetime ago.

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

You should chill out. You're a teenager. Everything seems like the end of the world right now, but it really isn't.

[deatht420-2]

it is good poem jessy and i hope you feel better

[Madame Dark Raven]

god was i stupid...there's no such thing as happiness its all fake and anyone who believes otherwise is just blind. I can stand this poem anymore...i can't stand who it was written about anymore. I'm done with venturing out into the world i'm going back to my safe place and try to make the best of it. But don't know how that's going to work. If you like this poem don't mind me i'm just rambling b/c of who it's about...you know who you are...hurt me and doesn't even know it.

[DARKSIDELONEWOLF]

wow that was good ^^

[Miss Salsa Sam]

not bad but a few spelling mistakes and you kept repeating words. But as long as you wrote it with passion and emotion, and tried your best it doesnt matter. GOOD JOB!

[Xxforgotten_kittyxX]

wow amazing..bravo..i love it -tear- awsome