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I've noticed alot.
The things you do.
I've determined them well.
I wanna show you.
The way your face lights up,
the moment you see me.
The way your eyes change colors.
When we're talking, neverending.
Your hugs,
My face in your hair.
Soft and sweet.
Like the smell of fresh air.
My hands on your waist.
The way you don't move away.
Keeping me close.
Wanting to stay.
These things that I've noticed,
I wish you could see.
Just so you know,
How happy they make me.
- by kendra_sun |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/04/2009 |
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- Title: The Things I've Noticed.
- Artist: kendra_sun
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This is real.
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And it's one of my first poems that actually rhyme all the way through.
Comments please.
Aha. - Date: 01/04/2009
- Tags: things noticed
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Comments (4 Comments)
- x_Amorei_x - 04/09/2009
- Nice =] 10/10
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- gatorsrock747 - 01/06/2009
- OMG i love it and it reminds me of twilight
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- Kuma Naru - 01/06/2009
- That is so beautiful. I love it. for some reson i fell like I can relate to this poem. Great job, keep it up. you have some real good talent!
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- fireluv89 - 01/05/2009
- i love this poem good job it does rhyme
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