- Gold, what is gold. Gold is loads and loads of money. It is as sweet as honey. Sometimes it makes people crazy , maybe cause their lazy and dum like gum. Gold is powerful and rich but not as much as family.
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- | Submitted on 01/05/2009 |
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- Title: GOLD
- Artist: ronaldino20
- Description: tells about gold
- Date: 01/05/2009
- Tags: gold
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Paper Crane Kiko - 02/14/2009
- immature..... VERY immature...... i think it needs better description and it lacks a certain feeling that GOOD poetry possesses....pardon the rudness but i am passionate about my poetry......
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- Demon at Dawn - 01/07/2009
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Ehhhh......
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- corrupted-loner - 01/07/2009
- you made a spelling mistake ^-^ it's 'dumb', not 'dum'. lol, nice poem though :p
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