move on

• Artist: 6I_c_died_ppl_they_kill66
• Description: its true
• Date: 01/09/2009
• Tags: move

why do i sudenly feel alone more then i ever have,
u don't hug me ,
u don't kiss me
i feel so along.
the reason why i am alone is because
u left me 3 years ago
and i still miss u.

he left me because he died of cancer
and nothing i can do will bring u back to me.
when i stand in front of ur grave in tears i bleave ur
right beside me,
when the wind blowes and the leaves fly around the grass
there all signs of u, letting me know u still love me and
its okay to move on

Comments

[Danika Miles]

I really like, but one thing could be worked on and that would be your tenses the switching from he and you sort of throws it a bit. good job though and good luck.

[Je t_aime Ran]

Um is this a story or a poem cause i couldnt tell the difference, but it was good...I liked it ^^